Not bad for two days.
Not a lot of animation, and you really coulda' have payed more attention to anatomy, but it was enjoyable.
I was a tad confused at some parts; like who died when there were only three people standing above the coffin, and where the daughter came from. Also the daughter and son colors looked the same when they were married. Oh, and you mispelt loneliness.
I actually only watched this flash because I recognized your name. lol
but you've gotten pretty good at storytellin', kudos man. let's see something with more animation though :].